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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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*When Harpy got the clone,he turned to a puff of smoke and it was a log Harpy was holding. And a pebble hit the ground near Kooki. And the clone threwed it.* "Ninjas can do that."


Ok, Trot, no offense, but you could have worded this a little better (especially considering that 'threwed' is not a real word). I think that something like this would be cool (you're welcome to disagree with me though) :

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As Harpy's talons sank into the clone, he disappeared in a puff of smoke to reveal that it was actually just a log that Harpy had caught hold of. A pebble suddenly hit the ground near Kooki, which had been thrown by the real clone. "Ninjas can do that."


Basically, you take this knife *hands Trot a knife*, then you stab the word 'and' continuously until it stops trying to hog the spotlight in your posts. Razz (If you'll notice, the only time I used the word 'and' in this post is when I was quoting you or mentioning it with apostrophes).

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*The Pheonix dodges a clump of the strange hair, laughing at his opponent's lack of speed. Unfortunatly, by dodging one clump of hair he had let himself colide with another.*

Pheonix: Hmm, perhaps I underestimated you... A little.

*The Pheonix pulls in his wings, shifting his weight onto Little Sister's hair.*

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Little Sister's legs buckle, and she's forced to release the tension in her hair.

~Keh, an amateur's move at best.~

As she divides her hair into seperate tendrils, they spread out all around the Pheonix, and it continues it's drop in amongst them. She sharpens the tendrils into simple blades, and begins attempting to slash at the Pheonix from various directions.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

~Sometimes the best move is a bad one.~

*The Pheonix screeches as a knife-hair stabs into it's neck.*

~Unfortunatly, you seem to have me cornered. Beginner's luck.~

((If the Pheonix opens it's wings to move out of the torrent of hair-blades, you'll shred them to pieces. Nice move Wink.))

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Thanks Net, although there's a few ways you could twist the current situation into your favour))

~Heh, blame it on whatever you like, you just lost in the first move.~

The clump of hair that the Pheonix had dodged earlier had been seperated as well, and a new flurry of dangerously sharp tendrils began attempting to skewer the Pheonix in between the tunnel created by the other tendrils surrounding it.

At this time, Little Sister's tongue spiralled into the mess of blades, aiming straight for the Pheonix's head.

((EDIT: Anyone having a hard time imagining what this situation looks like, worry no more! Now I can show you crappy sketches to illustrate what I'm doing, with the magic of a camera stuck to my computer! Razz Excuse the atrocious handwriting, I don't yet have a proper image editting program, so all the photos I take make writing backwards (so yes, I wrote all the labels backwards to solve this problem...)))

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"So Natu you like dodging, well lets see you dodge this!"

Zane transformed into his normal form then threw two shadow balls that home on to their target for a wille.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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((Thanks Net, although there's a few ways you could twist the current situation into your favour))

~Heh, blame it on whatever you like, you just lost in the first move.~

The clump of hair that the Pheonix had dodged earlier had been seperated as well, and a new flurry of dangerously sharp tendrils began attempting to skewer the Pheonix in between the tunnel created by the other tendrils surrounding it.

At this time, Little Sister's tongue spiralled into the mess of blades, aiming straight for the Pheonix's head.

((EDIT: Anyone having a hard time imagining what this situation looks like, worry no more! Now I can show you crappy sketches to illustrate what I'm doing, with the magic of a camera stuck to my computer! Razz Excuse the atrocious handwriting, I don't yet have a proper image editting program, so all the photos I take make writing backwards (so yes, I wrote all the labels backwards to solve this problem...)))


*The Pheonix spots the chance it'd been waiting for and lunges at Little Sister's tounge, hoping to sever it in two.*

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 12:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Ah, damn, this is what I was hoping you wouldn't do... Razz))

Little Sister cursed to herself in Parasitian as she felt her tongue get bitten in two by the Pheonix ((I'm assuming that you intended to sever it this way)). It's sudden increase in speed had also allowed the Pheonix to avoid the onslaught of sharp tendrils that had been coming straight for it, and now Little Sister had to focus on preventing the Pheonix from smashing her into the ground.

A quick movement from a single strand of her hair sliced through the hair surrounding the Pheonix, which freed up her movement enough to let her attempt to dodge it. Spinning to the left, she aimed to shove outwards at the Pheonix with her remaining hair to help her avoid it's divebomb.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Natu saw the shadow orbs coming to him. He had a plan. Natu ran to Zane, then away in a straight line. "Have a taste of your of medicine."

*Meanwhile, the clone saw Kooki coming. He was annoyed,this was going to long. The clone burst back into water, its original form.*

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 3:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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((Ah, damn, this is what I was hoping you wouldn't do... Razz))

Little Sister cursed to herself in Parasitian as she felt her tongue get bitten in two by the Pheonix ((I'm assuming that you intended to sever it this way)). It's sudden increase in speed had also allowed the Pheonix to avoid the onslaught of sharp tendrils that had been coming straight for it, and now Little Sister had to focus on preventing the Pheonix from smashing her into the ground.

A quick movement from a single strand of her hair sliced through the hair surrounding the Pheonix, which freed up her movement enough to let her attempt to dodge it. Spinning to the left, she aimed to shove outwards at the Pheonix with her remaining hair to help her avoid it's divebomb.


*With the typhoon of sharp and painful death gone, the Pheonix spreads it's wings and swerves back into the air.*

~That hurt, little one? Want HollowEyes to kiss it better? I do have one question, though. Does it grow back, or have I effectually neutered your ability-absorbing abilities?~

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 4:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

~See for yourself.~ The end of her tongue had already healed over, and the bud of a new one would soon form.

Little Sister thought carefully - having messed up that last move slightly had set her back to square one. Having the Pheonix in the air seemed like the biggest problem, so she formed two lances from her hair and rapidly hurled them at both of the Pheonix's wings.

((The tongue is the fastest part in the Parasitian body to regrow, as it's one of the most important parts.))

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 12:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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((The tongue is the fastest part in the Parasitian body to regrow, as it's one of the most important parts.))


((Well, there goes that plan. Out of curiosity, why hasn't HollowEye's tounge grown back?))

~...So the effects are only temporary? Well, it's better than nothing...~

*The Pheonix, paying more attention to his thoughts than his surroundings, shrieks with annoyence at the hair-lances now embedded in his wings. After a short period of time dotted with various curses and screams of anguish, the tips of his wings transform into long, spindly fingers which grab the hair-lances and yank them upward, hoping to throw Little Sister into the air with them.*

((I presume the hair-lances are still attached, of course. The Pheonix doesn't enjoy people stabbing his wings, as you can see in the above post.))

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 9:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((The cutting off of HollowEyes tongue was done in a special way, so that he can't grow it back. It's pretty much the worst level of punishment in Parasitian society. And yes, the lances were attached - most of Little Sister's attacks remain attached to herself, as she can only grow hair, she can't shoot it (it's also a lot easier for me to turn a failed attack into another that way Smile).))

Not expecting a move like this, Little Sister was dragged off the ground and hurled upwards. This was no good, as she knew that she'd definately be at a disadvantage in the air. Slicing through the ends of the hair lances ((leaving them in the Pheonix's wings and hands)), stiffened and sharpened all of her hair around her.

((The effect is kinda like an echidna/porcupine rolling itself up Razz))

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kooki felt tired and killing the clones was alot like shreading a couch, in anger. she went to the tree trunk and rested under the branches.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 04, 2006 4:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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((The cutting off of HollowEyes tongue was done in a special way, so that he can't grow it back. It's pretty much the worst level of punishment in Parasitian society. And yes, the lances were attached - most of Little Sister's attacks remain attached to herself, as she can only grow hair, she can't shoot it (it's also a lot easier for me to turn a failed attack into another that way Smile).))

Not expecting a move like this, Little Sister was dragged off the ground and hurled upwards. This was no good, as she knew that she'd definately be at a disadvantage in the air. Slicing through the ends of the hair lances ((leaving them in the Pheonix's wings and hands)), stiffened and sharpened all of her hair around her.

((The effect is kinda like an echidna/porcupine rolling itself up Razz))


((Can you give me any more details as to how HollowEye's tongue was removed? It's always helpful to know your opponent's greatest weakness, even if it's practically impossible to use against them.))

*The Pheonix, now blocked from his opponent via her porcupinesque hair, decides to use the simplest means possible against Little Sister. He glides above her pointy form and (put quite blatently) poops.*

((Bet you didn't count on that one Wink.))

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