Embri's Crash Course in Roleplaying Etiquette

Zane · Yellow Belt Old Friend Posts: 28

"Okay but try not to hold me back you inferior feline" Zane transformed into his snake form then he spit a enormous amount of acid into the lake making the lake green boiling ,with burning hot acid.

Embri · Black Spider Blackstar Native Old Friend Posts: 2172

"AHH! NO, SNOWLLLY!" Embri cries is dismay, grabbing the kitten by the scruff before she can pounce on Little Sister.

Scrambling away from the Parasitian with the kitten dangling from her mouth, Embri retreats a safe distance and drops her charge.

"DO NOT approach Little Sister, unless you want to be eaten." The unicorn admonishes. "She does not know what the word play means, except in the context of torturing her food before consuming it. Understand?" Embri looks SnowLilly in the eye.

Jent · Red Belt Old Friend Oblivion Knight Posts: 1049

*Natu saw the venom coming towards him.He has to do a more powerful defense.Natu gather some power to spring fast out of of the lake and into a tree.* "Good job Zane.Lets see how you fair aginst water bending." *Natu jumped to a higher tree and bend the poison water to use to defend himself.*

Leporidae · Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:35 pm Post subject:

Luckly, for her, Kooki was not the current target. She climbed up the tree Natu was in and waited paitently. She gave a wink at Zane as she rested in the branches.

3kul · Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:21 am Post subject:

~Keh, you're still no fun at all Embri.~ Little Sister shrugged and withdrew her tendrils, as well as her tongue. ~I don't think that such a dumb animal is really worth eating anyway.~ A few strands of hair extended towards SnowLilly and began to poke her again and again. ~Look at how defenseless and weak it is...~

((Damn... If only I'd posted before Embri did Twisted Evil

))

Swix · Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:42 am Post subject:

*What appears to be a huge golden eagle soars and surveys the scene below. Harpy watches with her enhanced eyesight, and spying a space large enough to land she does so. Flapping her huge wings powerfully to slow her descent then folding them as her talons touch the ground*

*The huge eagle turns a beady bright green eye to the amount of tempting furballs running around*

((Harpy's gonna be stuck like this for a while, so an eagles predatory instincts will be showing themselves more readily. And she can't talk while in this form. All she can do is screech at you if you do something she doesn't like))

Embri · Black Spider Blackstar Native Old Friend Posts: 2172

"That's right, she's not worth eating at all." Embri insists, stomping her hooves at Little Sister's tendrils. "Now back off. I've got work to do."

Embri notes the arrival of the huge golden eagle with concern. It looked easily large enough to make a meal out of the smaller creatures who had gathered.

Guest · Spam Bot

SnowLilly attemtes to bite Little Sister, totaly ignoring Embri's advise...

Goron40 · Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 2:02 pm Post subject:

"Erm... This is a pleasant Role Play," said Goron walking into the destroyed field, "Well these two seem... odd. I see that Embri has absolutely no control over them whatsoever... way to go horsey((Embri is not a horse))."

Goron looked around. A lake boiling with acid, a giant snake, a kitten sneaking up on Little Sister, these were the things that made Role Playing all worth it.

"Now for my constructive criticism. Zane, your spelling could use some work. Snowlilly, it would appear you are switching tenses between posts, yoy have but the occasional typo, so I wouldn't worry about that too much.

Zane · Yellow Belt Old Friend Posts: 28

Zane just stood there and withstood the attack it had no affect." Ha foolish ninja my snake form is immune to his own venom."

Zane then transformed to his original form then threw a barrage of shadow balls at Natu."Now Kooki do your thing!"

Jent · Red Belt Old Friend Oblivion Knight Posts: 1049

*Natu saw the shadow orbs coming to him plus heard what Zane said.Natu jumped and vanised to thin air.But five Natu were reapired in the trees."Zane.Do you want me to fight back?"said all of the Natus

(Note.four of them are shadow clones.One hit and there out.)

Zane · Yellow Belt Old Friend Posts: 28

"Fight back if you want it won't make a difference ."
"Kooki I'll let you take care of these clones. "
Zane transformed into a giant bat then flew high in the sky then used sonar to try and track Natu.

Goron40 · Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 2:27 pm Post subject:

"One more thing. Commas are our friends. Use them excessively."

Jent · Red Belt Old Friend Oblivion Knight Posts: 1049

*The realy Natu ran to the ground and got Trace's mirror.Then went back in the trees.While the clones,were ready to fight.*

Goron40 · Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 2:36 pm Post subject:

"Not like that. Try replacing all the peroids in that sentence with commas, TROT. And the one comma you have in there is unneccesary."