Zane, Prince of Darkness!

[Zane]

Name: Zane
Species: Shadow wraith vampire
Age: 17
Weaponry: 4 Katanas, which are very durable and highly resistant to damage.
4 Matching sheaths to hold the swords, which go around Zane's waist, and are also very strong.

Armor: Natural Scaly Hide

Appearance: Zane has a third eye in the middle of his forehead, and a large, curved horn above it. He has four arms and bat wings on his back. His teeth are pointy, as one would assume for his kind, and he has bat-like ears. His hands have three fingers, as do his feet. Zane has long spiked red hair. His four arms have sharp claws, and spikes that stick out from several places.

Powers:

Shadow ball - Zane can throw these projectiles at enemies.
Energy Drain - An attack that takes away a foe's power and gives it to Zane.
Flying - Zane's wings are fully functional, and he can fly almost silently.
Super Strength - His four arms are much stronger than a normal human's would be.

Transformations:

Zane has three extra forms he can change into.

Giant Bat - This form gives Zane access to sonar and a Sonic Blast attack.
Giant Snake - As a large venomous snake, Zane can spit poison and strangle anything he catches.
Siamese Cat - Possibly Zane's most unusual form, as a feline he has access to incredible speed and very, very sharp claws.

History:

A very long time ago, an ancient Demon Lord terrorized his realms. A great hero rose up against the Demon Lord, and slew him after a great battle that lasted for many years. On the moment of their mutual destruction, with his dying breath, the Demon Lord cursed the land, destroying his home world in a fit of rage. A single survivor of the cataclysm endured; a tiny fragment of the Demon Lord which manifested as an egg. The egg drifted through space for uncountable millennia, until it was caught in the gravity field of a tropical world. The egg survived it's fiery fall from the sky, to be found by a race of intelligent feline creatures. Zane hatched, and was tasked by the last remains of the Demon Lord to reclaim his place as ruler of the Universe. The Demon Lord's essence imbued Zane with his powers, and he killed the feline creatures who had discovered him. Zane, for some reason known only to himself, chose the form of the slain cats as one of his own. Many years came to pass, in which the young demon-spawn practiced and honed his skills, trapped on the tropical world. His progenitor returned once again, this time to free his sole heir from his prison - and sent him to a place where he could begin to rebuild his empire - Psychotopia.

[3kul]

Four arms? Three eyes? One large, curved horn? Sounds quite familiar to me... No, Zane appears to be quite different to HollowEyes, so I'm not going to be at your throat screaming that you stole my ideas.

Ok, feedback, because I'm such a kind soul *pauses for laughter* and since you're somewhat new to this whole scene (at least, this is what I've gathered from Embri's posts), I may as well break out my l33t nitpicking skillz.

Katanas... rhyme with bananas. I'm not a huge fan of katanas, as they've become quite the generic weapon. But that's just my opinion, don't let me keep you down.

The more important question I have is to do with the resistance of the swords. From what I've heard, katanas are made for speed, slicing and thrusting, but can break reasonably easy. Not really a question actually, more of a request, but could you sort of outline why yours are durable and highly resistant to damage? (made in a special way, etc). Also, could you go into a little more detail about your powers? Like, how does energy drain work? Is it done with a bite, or what?

Other than that, it all seems pretty good - interesting history, and some interesting abilities there too. I'm sure that DP will be interested in the Psychotopian aspect of your character's story (though the first hurdle will be learning to speak the Psychotopian language... good luck with that ).