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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:40 am    Post subject: Lost yet not Reply with quote

<<<<OCC I use first person roleplay, and Snowy is a girl.>>>>

Where am I? I thought as I walked along the cold snowy plain. My fur was still baby soft, the snow never felt cold to me. In freezing weather I was at my happiest. I walked along, and saw a cave I ran toward it. I then skidding on the ice, and going very fast, and yelping I was pushed inside so fast, that when I hit the wall, the entrance came crasing down. I gasp as the ice spears come down. As the cave shook I hoped with all my might the ice spears hanging down from the roof would not come down, but alas they did. I ducked, and they all missed. I run toward the exit, ice falling nearly on top of me. I then tell the ice at the exit "Snowy coming though please move!" The ice parted letting me run though. I run out of the snowbank grasping, and wheezing. I then hear someone hanging around, hideing in a snow hole. I ran over to the snow hole, and say "Hi my name is Snowy what is yours?" I ran around the snow hole happily skimming over the ice.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((why not? I prefer a narrative style of RP, almost as if you are writing a story from the third person point of view. Other than that there are minor style differences between what is accustom here and what you are used to. I've seen places before that uses the << >> notation for OIC chatter, but we prefer the double parantheses notation here for that. At the end of the day it really doesn't matter, we understood what you mean))

"There, do you see him. That is the new pupil of whom I spoke"

Dau'Pay's teeth chattered as he peered from behind the snow bank. He no longer had to worry about freezing in the way his Immortal counterpart did, but he still did not like the cold, and felt it biting at him even through all the clothes he had on.

"That dog? You want me to train a dog now? What am I supposed to run, a Dojo or a Kennel?" DP responded through mindspeak

"Have I ever led us wrong before?"

DP bit back his answer. He wanted to remind Au'Marui of the mis-step that led to his and the god's seperate yet linked state, but he didn't. That fight has been had already, and DP knew the arrogance that comes with immortality would never let Au'Marui admit a mistake.

"HI my name is Snowy what is yours?", the snow pup's hyperactive voice sounded, bringing DP out of his thoughts.

"My name is Dau'Pay, but you can just call me DP. Would you happen to know where you are, little puppy?" DP said, following the puppy running around him. DP could tell this was going to be Violet all over again. It wouldn't be good for the Canine if she found out the wrong way that she managed to land herself in the dimensional crossroads that was Blackstar, so we might as well get that unpleasentness out of the way.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((OCC ok thanks for telling me you guys use the things)
I said "It does not matter where I am as long as I have snow!" I jumped on the ice slidding around on my butt, and said "Lets play with the snow!" I loved snow so much. I went up to a mountain of snow walking slowly, and demended "Make me a snowfort." I then concentred on the snow bending and moving it. About 5 minutes later I had made a super big snow fort, loaded with big snowballs. "I will give you 5 minutes to make a snow fort and snowballs, if you do not make them in time I have no mercy." I gripped a snowball in my paw holding it threatly, I was able to grip snowballs in my paw, even though I held it bad I still could. I say "I am counting hurry up so we can have fun!" I smiled knowing I had a lot of snowballs in my fort.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A bit away...
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A figure completely covered in various below temperature gear moved through a patch of thick snow. Shivering, despite the layers of coats, it came to a stop at the base of Mt. Neverrest, the highest peak in all of the Dojo. With careful movements, the mystery explorer began to unload a grappling hook....

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