C chewie vs. Henry:)

[Chewbacca]

Chewie, blown against the roof, almost killed, quickly fell against the floating platform. Chewie attempts to heal itself, but can only heal partially. It looks down towards Henry =), and watches him smash a rectangular object that has " Energy Box For Platform" writen on it. Just then the platform goes crashing down onto the rock pillars. Is it's opponent dead or alive?

[huynh_192265]

Henry:) realizes his fatal mistake. He gulped as the platform heads to him. Henry:) murmured something, then uses his Solidified Beetle Charm in a desperate attempt to save himself, and hopes it will save him.

[Blackstar Foundation]

Henry:) sticks a Solidified Beetle Charm Sample to themselves, slamming Self with their newly gained rocky limb. After being activated, the charm disintegrates.

[Chewbacca]

Chewie tries to heal itself again but still doesn't get fully healed. It looks at Henry=)'s last attempt to save himself, which is when Henry=) turns into stone. Chewie then flies up to avoid the impact of the platform against the rock pillars, and then notices that Henry=) has gotten washed away in the process. Chewie then busts through the top of the volcano, using it's super human strength, and flies to the beach where it can have a long, relaxing rest.

[huynh_192265]

(Well that was problematic...didn't think that will happen)
Henry:) realizes his defeat and sinks away in the crimson red lava. Flashbacks stared to occur to him. With his history and origin recurring in his he only hopes there will be a clone of him somewhere else.

This revelation started a glowing effect, the Togepi looked like it was evolving while in his stone state. He finally breaks free looking like a jet black Togetic, with the stone shell breaking off. He smiled and flew off, with the charm permanently embedded within him...

[Coolpikaaa]

Now for Judging....

C. Chewie
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Believability: As you had super powers, this is kind of hard to mark.You started kind of slow, using you powers generically, but as it got closer to the end you really picked up the pace.
8/10

Powerplay: Again, having your super powers, this was hard to mark.You used you powers well, but I think you need to spice it up a bit more so it doesn't look as if everything is too easy.Also, when you slammed Huynh into the pillar. I am counting that as powerplay because you essentially said you moved "grabbing and smashing him into the rock platform."
-3 to score

Personality/Flair: Overall good job, but as I said before, try to spice up you posts a bit more.
8/10

Cleverness/Inventiveness: This pulled you down a lot. You really only used stuff that was right there with you, next time try using your abilities to turn the arena into a deathtrap. IE : Super speed to twist the lava into a flaming tornado and such.
12/20

Grammar/Spelling: Great job here, I really didn't have any trouble with your flow or grammar. Keep up the great work! The only problem is that you repeated the mistake of "Phisic".
9/10

34/50


Henry
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Believability: You did a great job against a super hero like C chewie.Your attacks were reasonable, even having a small tantrum after your flamethrower didn't work.Although there were some times.....
7/10

Powerplay: Great job here. Next time don't worry so much about having to take every blow head on, try things such as "a grazing hit".The only problem was your constant item onslaught at the beginning.
-2 to score

Personality/Flair: I'm actually impressed. Your stunt with using the Alchemist powers to split the water was amazing! Keep up get ideas like that.
9/10

Cleverness/Inventiveness: *points to above paragraph*
Again, good job with you water stunt.Although your idea with cutting the power box was a good one...it sort of backfired causing your demise.
16/20

Grammar/Spelling: Overall ok. You need to work on making every sentence flow with the one before, so it isn't choppy. A lot better than some earlier works though.
7/10

37/50

Winner of the battle is Chewie, winner in point is Henry. Looks like a tie I guess.

-coolpikaaa