My attempt at a poem XD

[Zukoron]

The night fades from the sky and morning shines through a window.
Through the window a man riddled with scars wakens from his deep slumber.
He gets up and had a terrible nightmare and it was not just a nightmare it was his past.
He usually had dreams of his past, but not his worst time in his life,
he usually kept the demons of the time he felt the most weakest down.
He found his mind with the thoughts racing through his head.
How the one whom he called a father betrayed him, and how a love he thought was true lied and stabbed his back with a dull blade.
He stands infront of his mirror becoming angry with himself for letting a whore of a woman into his heart.
How he remebers her tying him to the bed and calling out to his abusive father.
He was in disbelief when he saw his father walk in and in more disbelief when they began to have sex with each other infront of him.
How he fought like a caged beast wanted to get at the capture. He soon stopped and felt the weakness of his frail human body,
as blood was flowing from the cuffs around his wrists and ankles.
He wanted to look away but couldn't how she did things to his father she said she would never do.
He shed tears for the first time in ten years,
he could not believe he was getting this as his birthday present.
He was left to die of hunger on the day of his birth, he was left there with a gag in his mouth and how he kept trying to break free.
He soon passed out from bloodloss,
but before he went under he heard his friend break into the house.
It was empty but the bed and him.
His friend took him called the police and for an aid unit and they came and got him and took him to a hospital.
He was given tests to see if the cuffs gave him any infection.
He had no insurance and paid that price.
Now he does not hesitate from this outcome any longer.
He grabs a small kitchen knife,
he was going to end it,
he was going to make sure that he felt no more pain.
He was going to slay his demons and possably take away his pain.
He gets in his car still in his pajamas and drove
he drove to someones house and he banged on the door the woman he hated with all of his heart that he had once loved with all of it.
He grabed her hair and pulled her out of her home and stabbed her until blood covered his face from the violance of his stabs.
He was not finished yet, he had to take care of more.
He got back into his car and drove out to his fathers home now. He got out and his father greeted him with a shotgun,
pointing to his sons face and he kicks his father in his jewels,
he then takes the shotgun and blows his fathers face to the floor.
He had some more demons to end before he was through.
He drove to the one who could not just let him die,
oh how he wanted to die, but didn't have the stones to do it to himself.
He got to his old friends house and with shotgun and knife the old friend greets him with a smile
He only took the knife and ended his old friends life quickly with one strike to the heart.
He was done with the demons, but now what?
He had something to live for before, but what to live for now?
He killed his inner demons with the death of the ones who had wronged him in some way.
He takes a drive and he drives out to a known drop off for couples and smirks seeing all of the people leave.
He shakes his head and grabs the shotgun,
he puts the barrel in his mouth.
He pulls the trigger and the shotgun releases its bullet making a hole through his head and his head kciks back to only have the shotgun become the pole to hold his head up.

[Mitsukai]

Oh my... this is very dark. Umm... this doesn't sound anything like a poem to me, but whatever floats your boat I guess.

[Zukoron]

Hey edgar allen poe was dark too lol.

[Mitsukai]

But to me, he was dark in a different way. He ventured into the unknown, showing it through subtle ways, so when you figured it out it came as a shock... but one that you knew was coming.

[Zukoron]

I know, but I was just trying to find and excuse