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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:42 pm Post subject: |
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Lilic sighed. "I guess I can take a tall latté" She said, she needed to stay awake, she hadn't had any sleep the last few nights. "Don't be long Orly." She said, a nick name she used to call him when he was still in the womb and before she had to go away from Alexis. _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:50 pm Post subject: |
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Orlando slightly hesitated for a moment before he opened the door and went around to the parking lot to get his car from there to get his order. _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:19 pm Post subject: |
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Lilic got up smiling and waving as she started to lok around the shop at all the different things that were here. she didn't know a lot on tattooing but she found this place neat. It was his shop.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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It had tatto equipment; machines, inks, foot peddles. A sanitary box where the needles were sanitized everytime a new customer came in. There was six different tatooing chairs. One for each of the four boys, one for Alexis and another one for Daimond as well. The inks were out in brand-new bottles. There were fresh white sheets for the clients to sit or lay on when they got their tattoos. On the walls displayed hundreds maybe thousands of different tattoos with their prices all hand drawn by the six male artists in the shop. On the front counter it was spotless no dirt or dust anywhere. And at the front of the counter on the top were six portfolios where the artists put samples of their best hand-drawn tattoos. The piercings that were there were mind boggling there was every shape imaginable for studs, hoops and other piercing stuff. The screensaver read welcome to Angel Wings
The cafe had rows of neatly placed and set tables. The menu was clear and easy to read. Everything was priced very reasonable. The restrooms were clean and the waitresses were very friendly. The regulars were busy chatting up a storm when he walked in and everyone shouted "hey orlando" as he went to the counter to buy the latte and his soup. _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:40 pm Post subject: |
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It had tatto equipment; machines, inks, foot peddles. A sanitary box where the needles were santitized everytime a new customer came in. There was six different tatooing chairs. One for each of the four boys, one for Alexis and another one for Daimond as well. The inks were out in brand-new bottles. There were fresh white sheets for the clients to sit or lay on when they got their tattoos. On the walls displayed hundreds maybe thousands of different tattoos with their prices all hand drawn by the six male artists in the shop. On the front counter it was spotless no dirt or dust anywhere. And at the front of the counter on the top were six portfolios where the artists put samples of their best hand-drawn tattoos. The piercings that were there were mind boggling there was every shape imaginable for studs, hoops and other piercing stuff. The screensaver read welcome to Angel Wings
The cafe had rows of neatly placed and set tables. The menu was clear and easy to read. Everything was priced very reasonable. The restrooms were clean and the waitresses were very friendly. The regulars were busy chatting up a storm when he walked in and everyone shouted "hey Orlando" as he went to the counter to buy the latte and his soup. |
((ALMOST perfect! ^^))
It had tatto equipment; machines, inks, foot peddles. A sanitary box where the needles were santitized everytime a new customer came in. There was six different tatooing chairs. One for each of the four boys, one for Alexis and another one for Daimond as well. The inks were out in brand-new bottles. There were fresh white sheets for the clients to sit or lay on when they got their tattoos. On the walls displayed hundreds maybe thousands of different tattoos with their prices all hand drawn by the six male artists in the shop.
On the front counter it was spotless no dirt or dust anywhere. And at the front of the counter on the top were six portfolios where the artists put samples of their best hand-drawn tattoos. The piercings that were there were mind boggling there was every shape imaginable for studs, hoops and other piercing stuff. The screensaver read welcome to Angel Wings
The cafe had rows of neatly placed and set tables. The menu was clear and easy to read. Everything was priced very reasonable. The restrooms were clean and the waitresses were very friendly. The regulars were busy chatting up a storm when he walked in and everyone shouted "hey Orlando" as he went to the counter to buy the latte and his soup.
((that would have been better, just that one seperation, almost perfect! VERY well done!!))
Lilic let out a low whistle. "Clean as can be, not a slight bit of mess in this entire place, amazing...I wonder who they do it, Orly, Romey, Neo, Angy" She said their nicknames as second nature. "I can't remember why I know those names like that but they seem so familiar, so....Normal"
Lilic said to herself as she looked around the place going behind the counter even to look, good thing about being short. She looked around checking out the portfolios and even the drawings on the walls remembering a few from her high school years. "Good old Alexis." _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 11:46 pm Post subject: |
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Orlando came back. "I'm back, I got you food anyway. My cousin recommended the chocolate cake so I got it for you" he said as he put the bag down. "I got you a chocolate latte" he said as he moved the portfolios and sat on the counter. "Plexi-glass gotta love it" he said handing her a styrofoam box. Inside the cake was huge it had two large layers and smothered in cookie crumbs and chocolate frosting. _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 12:13 am Post subject: |
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((EXCELLENT!!))
Lilic smiled. "thanks Orly" She said as she started to eat it well. "This place..It's so neat, and this art...Alexis did these didn't he?" She asked pointing to his star he had done on his arm, art class, Mrs. Johnson. he had gotten caught and sent to the office. _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 12:19 am Post subject: |
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"Yeah, my dad did a lot of crazy stuff" Orlando said as he opened his pop can. "He got his dragon finished and coloured last christmas. It looks great" he said taking a sip. _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 12:32 am Post subject: |
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Lilic looked at him as she smiled. "Last I knew, he was trying to get that put on. I'm glad he has, it must look great on him" She told Orlando. _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 12:45 am Post subject: |
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"It does look great on me. Thanks for notcing it Lilic" Alexis said as he came in from the street. "Here's your BLT dad. Real put extra bacon on it just the way you like it" Orlando said handing the last items in the bag to his dad. Alexis smiled as he took the paper off of the straw and stuck it into the pop cup.
He was wearing a pair of blue jeans with a big hole torn into the right knee. His hair was pulled back into a loose ponytail. He had on a white t-shirt and on his right arm you could see the dragon tattoo. He had rings on everyfinger except for the ring finger on his left hand. Meaning that after all these years he was still single and looking. He smiled his teeth were now perfectly straight after years of braces wearing. And his eyes were bright and full of life after wearing glasses for years as well. _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 1:07 am Post subject: |
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The only thing she could see that had changed was his amount of tattoos as she smiled. "Hey, 'Lexis...Can I talk to you in another room...Alone?" She asked him as she smiled, she still had feelings for Alexis and her eyes showed it to him.
Lilic cared for her old boyfriend and without her brother's here to stop her this time, she was free to do whatever she wanted, at all. She smiled hugging him. "It feels good to see you again, by the way." She told him clinging a bit, she had severly missed him. _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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"It feels good to be clung to by you" he said as he kissed her. "I'm still single, if you wanna pick up where we left off I mean" he said blushing. "And the boys need you. You are their mother after all". _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 10:58 pm Post subject: |
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Lilic looked at him. "I don't remember them at all Alexis...I remember their names but nothing else...Nocturne....I think he erased my memory of my family..." She told him.
Lilic sighed heavily. "I would like to Alexis...But how can I when I only remember us in highschool, before he took you away, the main memory is of art class with the star being drawn....Your first tattoo...It got me into a heck load of trouble!"
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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He kissed her deeply. "I've made photo albums and scrapebooks. I knew that I would find you. And I told the boys about you" Alexis said hugging her. "I want to be with you" _________________ Life is to short for trivial things. |
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| He kissed her deeply. "I've made photo albums and scrapebooks. I knew that I would find you. And I told the boys about you" Alexis said hugging her. "I want to be with you" |
((Wee, comma trainin' time, lol. All right. This can be changed to be a better post: He kissed her deeply. "I've made photo albums and scrapebooks. I knew that I would find you comma here--> , <-- comma here and I told the boys about you" Alexis said hugging her. "I want to be with you" 'And' should never start a sentence, thank you!))
Lilic looked at him as she smiled. "Thank you Alexis, maybe I could see the photo albums...It would be nice to be around them again...Maybe we could date, see how it is...Where are the rest of the boys though...Why is only Orly here?" She asked curiously at her old boyfriend. _________________ Multi-hosting RP site, smaller one-topic RPs. All genres accepted. Looking for all RPers....
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