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Here we go, my first character
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 3:22 am    Post subject: Here we go, my first character Reply with quote

Name:
Phen the Valient

Age:
627

Gender:
Male

Species:
Titan (form of giant)

Description and Physiology:
*The most famous and glamorous of the Palladium giants is the noble warrior known as the titan. These renowned champions of justice, wander the world like knights-errant, seeking adventure, combating evil and righting wrongs. They often travel alone or in pairs and regularly join mixed groups of adventurers for brief periods. When a titan finds a group he really connects with, he may stay with them for years. Some such groups have become legendary. Titans have become such a symbols of stength, honor, and courage that both humanoids and giants alike consider them to be demigods.

The titans are one of the archaic races that survived the battle with the dreaded Old Ones. Until the Elf-Dwarf War, titans were the elves' greates ally. The two had faced the Old Ones together and fought at each other's side for the tens of thousands of years that followed. Sadly, during the Age of Elves, the noble giants saw their old friends change. They recognized and spoke against the injustices and degradation committed by the elves of the New Kingdome, but elves would not listen and continued their crimes against dwarves and other races. Unable to bring themselves to act against their beloved allies, the titans abandoned the Elven Empire and stayed out of the Great War. Even so, the fall-out of the war would cause the demise of 20% of the titan people as they tried to rescue gnomes. Algor and others from the holocaust that the two insane combatant races rained down upon each other. Since that day few titans have called an elf friend.

Titans are intelligent, compassionate people with their own agenda in the war against evil. Their exact numbers are unknown even to them, but most believe that there are fewer than 10,000 in the world. Their never-ending quest to combat evil and injustice has compelled them to travel far, even to other worlds.

*This all taken from The Palladium fantasy series, and is a trademark of Palladium Books, written by Kevin Siembieda

17 feet tall, 850 pounds. Golden hair and eyes as white as the sun (I know the sun is yellow, but where you stair directly at it, it's white.)

Physical Abilities:
*Superior physical strenght, prowess, endurance, and beauty. Nightvision 90 feet (27.4m), excellent overall vision and hearing.

Supernatural Abilities:
*See the invisible, bio-regenerate (healing), turn undead, impervious to a vampiers bite, and dimensional teleport at will (very low success rate, increases on magical ground)

Weaponry:
9 foot claymore of exceptional quailty with small runes etched in, has the power to cut ghosts. Twin "bucklers" (really nomal sized round sheils, which are small to him) 2 foot sword, which is much like a dagger to him, that glows witht the briliance of the sun, can destroy lesser vampires instantly.

Equipment:
Full set of plate armor. Shines with a brilent silver, with spiked fingertips and knee plates, the armor is trimmed with gold, and has a large sun gilded onto the chest

Home:
Nomad

Origin:
Born of pure Titan origans, he travels the land as a proud knight, recognized only in small cities, not any larger ones, tends to help those in rural areas.

History:
The occasional dragon fight, saving and helping rebuild poor comunities, slaying many demons and evil entities, and other such knightly duties, all the same ol' same ol' for a Titan.

Alignment:
The ideal knight, strict to the code of chivelry, and in some cases just a goody-two-shoes.

Personality:
Always kind and happy, the only reason he'd become angry or upset is if something was happening to some poor individual or other weaker persons.

Known Weaknesses:
Sometimes feels to supperior, and thus talks down a bit to the people he is with. Also, though intelegent, is often tricked because he's too nice, and honestly too trusting.

Allies:
None, but no enemies that he knows of.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Intriguing, so he's a bit of a protector of the weak? Be careful not to god mode darling, it will be easy with that character. Over all alright sheet, if you don't count the spelling mistakes.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you mean protector of the weak there Raven Razz, though I kinda disagree with you on the powerplaying thing - from the looks of it, this character's pretty well balanced out.

I suppose if you were undead you could complain, but I can quickly see a few weaknesses (which is a good thing, imo every decent character has them). I'd be a bit of a jerk if I simply went and revealed them all, but to give one example, heightened senses such as Phen's sight or hearing are often a double-edged sword.

Seems like a pretty cool character to me Genericman, I'll be interested to see him in action (because truth be told, we don't have facilities to accomodate for the exceedingly tall around here Razz).

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I believe I said godmoding, not power play Wink And leave me alone Mr. Nit picker, I'm extremely sleep deprived!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not the best speller around, but if you can understand every word, that there shouldn't be that much of a problem, I'm sorry he seem's too uber, I just took most of it out of the book. He's like a pallidin/ defender of justice... I wanna see how he plays out, but I don't believe he has any abilities to god anything, I mean he is good, but I came with fair weaknesses, and the only thing that really need fear him are generic demons, vampires (that arn't players), and other such deamons.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You'll find a lot of demons and vampires here. I'm um... sorta demon o.O Quite a crazy story. And no, your character isn't too god modish. I was just saying be careful, I'm never good at seeing weaknesses Razz
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well than don't worry about it, apparantly other people are...
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, 3Kul is a nit picker who thinks too much. You're lucky you're not a girl or he'd steal your underwear!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe so Raven, but this is one nit-picking underwear-theif who showed you what's what back at Gameware. As I recall I had you cornered and disarmed as I threatened to destroy your sword if you didn't surrender when you decided to stop posting in that particular thread, remember? Wink

Thank you for the compliment though Genericman, it's nice to have people notice the things that you are good at Smile.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I noticed you noticed that I can notice other people's noticeing, and I thank you because of the thanks that you thanked me with after I thanked you for thanking me...
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

3Kul: Darling, that was months ago. I was still a n00b in my eyes now. Trust me darling... it will never happen again.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oi! You two take it out of the character thread, and into the challenge arena! I'll judge Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 6:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you!
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, a character like this might dwarf my Predator's natural power-playish design, not to mention simply his size!
I'm no longer the titan of the Dojo! Wahhh!
*Sobs in a corner* Razz
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The titan of the dojo...? 'scuse me...? *coughcoughCollatorcoughgakcough*
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