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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:07 am Post subject: Zerrer's Manti Battle |
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Zerrer wanted to be a manti, but he had to battle an already existing one, so he headed down to the training dojo to battle.
Zerrer stays in an all-aware pose, one he was taught by his father, with his hands at his blades, Eysse and Fierre... _________________ http://zerrer.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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Leporidae hidden amognst the trees, the exitment of battle made her whiskers tingle. Looking downward, the two swords caught her eye. She shot out of the tree and landed infront of Zerrer. Wings outstreched, the Rabicat had a glint looked onward at her victem. Her yellow eyes leered as she spoke
"I have been watching. You seem to be the type that also wants a good challenge. Tell you what, I'll challenge you to a spar and we can fight. This can even count for a green mantis belt if that is what you seek. Do you except?" She unsheath her sword with one paw and grabbed for her staff in the other. "I never seen you around here before. This will be intresting. Incase you don't know what a spar is, it's a normal fight in every way except you don't kill your opponent." |
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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"you mean a wimp's battle? OK then"
After casting a spell to Guard his weapons from killing anybody, he lifts up into the air, calm as a bird in the sky, and then he suddenly starts to whizz down on top of L, both swords out. _________________ http://zerrer.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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| With a quick motion, Leporidae swung her staff infront of her horisinally infront and over her. The two swords clank against the sturdy staff, leaving only dents. While Zerrer was applying all of his energy of his swords. Trying to keep the staff from breaking into two at the same time, she lunges her sabre at Zerrer's tummy softly. ((Good so far. A few more descriptives would be definetly helpful though.)) |
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:44 pm Post subject: |
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Zerrer parries backwords, getting pushed into a tree, the he climbs up the tree with only his heels, then he frontflips to an upside-down position, both swords spinning, then he hovers there, casting a spell
"Eysse, control the Cold of fear,
Fierre, Control the Heat of anger,
I command you!"
chanting it over and over again, but always his swords are pointed at L. _________________ http://zerrer.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:54 pm Post subject: |
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((Good. Your getting better. Now, try to fix up your spelling and grammer a tad. I know I'm bad at it myself, but probibly you will have some better luck. You can easily take this really long sentance here:
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| Zerrer parries backwords, getting pushed into a tree, the he climbs up the tree with only his heels, then he frontflips to an upside-down position, both swords spinning, then he hovers there, casting a spell |
And turn it into seperate sentence like this (with a few spelling errors fixed):
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| Zerrer parries backwards, getting pushed into a tree. Then he climbs up the tree with only his heels, then he front flips to an upside-down position. With both swords spinning, he then hovers there, casting a spell. |
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Taking a few rounds of blackfliping, she manages to avoid the attacks. With the exception of a few minor scratches on her lifejacket of course. Laying flat on the ground with no more space to move, she kicked upwards at Zerrer's head with desperation. In case this fails, she unsheathed her claws and prepared for what might happen next.[/quote] |
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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Zerrer rolled in midair, and tried to pull L in much like a tornado would. _________________ http://zerrer.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:16 pm Post subject: |
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| ((Zerrer, you didn't say whenever you got hit by Lep's attack or not! Please edit your post so I can feel that I wasn't ignored. After that, I'll post Lep's response. Try to avoid doing that in the future, alright?)) |
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:37 pm Post subject: |
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((Alright. Much better. Good so far!))
Due to her wings, Lep was easily blown into the tornado . . . thing. Flapping her wings, Lep tried to escape, but allas, she failed. She took out her staff and held it out, hopping the movments of the tornado like thing would lead her to blow Zerrer with the staff anywhere on his body. |
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:46 am Post subject: |
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and then, whilst zerrer has control of the wind, he blows it away from him the second he got hit in the groin. _________________ http://zerrer.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:56 pm Post subject: |
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| Leporidae was soon had her back full of bark and leaves. As the wind kept blowing, she slid down the tree trunk. She waited there for a while, waiting to see what Zerrer will do next. |
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