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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 3:18 pm Post subject: Darkness Follows |
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Name: Cephalus
Race: Human
Class: Swordsman
Weapons: FocusSword- emerald bladed sword that is unbreakable, glows ethereally and allows command of the spirit Rasheir, the great wolf (hence my name) flares with a opalescent light when stolen
Description: Medium height, age 19, dark hair and eyes, long baggy clothes hides light armor
Story: last surviving heir to the blood line of the Sunnis Kings he looks for a palace that had fallen out of the sky.
Pet: Rasheir
Species: ethereal hound
Weapons: two front claws and lighting for teeth
Description: can appear to be a vague mist or a well defined wolf made of clouds he is a pleasant white but turns black in combat
Story: Guardian of the bloodline, he follows Cephalus where ever he goes and will defend him to the death. |
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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Lightning for teeth? That must make some interesting dentist visits.... _________________ ~Goron~
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:43 pm Post subject: |
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Although very short, your story seems pretty interesting, probably because a castle falling out of the sky doesn't seem to be a very likely thing to happen. The flare system on your sword is a clever idea too. |
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