Results-TagTeam:Round1-Match3:Addman/Holloweyes v GBE/Fade

[UncleAsriel]

[Addman]

Believability: 6/10: Nothing I found particularly hard to swallow. Overall a decent matchup, with nothing too over-the-top.

Powerplay: -3/10: Despite being on the evil Council, I’ve not seen you do anything overly powerplay-ish in the RP.The bit with the invisible daggers pushed it for me, but didn’t break it.

Inventiveness: 6/10: Clever stuff, with the crumb clouds and thinking up what might be done with Holloweyes.

Personality/Flair: 9 /10: “After all, they do say woman have more hiding places than men, but not nearly as many as a muppet.” Witty stuff like that always helps out.

Cleverness: 7 /10: Cookie grenades and caramel markers? What will cookie monster think up next?

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 Nothing the matter here.

Teamwork: 8 /10 Giving Holloweyes a chance to kick some kiester after doing a number on your opponent really fleshed out a bit of storyline. Good stuff

Total: 43


[Holloweyes]

Believability: 5/10: I can’t really find anything unbelievable for an alien-with-a-large-appetite-an-mastry-of-magic-charms-of-various-elemental –powers to do.

Powerplay: -2/10: Not taking the blinding effect of the flash grenade might be pushing things a wee bit, but getting deafened certainly wasn’t.

Inventiveness: 8/10: I’m always amazed at how you can cook up and and exciting ways to use those charms. Great stuff.

Personality/Flair: 9 /10: I guess I’ve fallen for that old parasitian charm. Your own, indescribable writing style just does something for me that I can’t place my finger on. Good job.

Cleverness: 5/10: Nothing noteworthy sprung to mind, but nothing overly boring either.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 Nothing out of place here.

Teamwork: 6 /10 Taking advantage of the shot adman gave you have a good one indeed. Excellent synergy.

Total: 41





[Fade]

Believability: 4/10: Being able to block the charms with a piece of cloths moved in a special way seems a bit powerplayish. Still, having your hand petrify in the holding booth was a fair trade-off.

Powerplay: - 3/10: For the cloth blocking bit. Not too grievous, mind you, but enough for a slight penalty.

Inventiveness: 7/10: Like the use of caramel-bits as camouflage- great way to turn an enemy’s weapon against him. The invisible daggers were a subtle touch.

Personality/Flair: 6/10: Nothing outstanding here, although the bit about locking away emotions helped to lay out the groundwork for your character. I’d like to have seen more of that.

Cleverness: 5/10: Nothing overwhelming, but not bad at all. “Patience was something you needed in abundance when you did the job she did.” I’d have liked to have seen more of this sort of thing.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 No complaints

Teamwork: 6 /10 Phase seemed to be right ready to take on the opposition while you were in danger. Good play here.

Total: 35


[Phase]

Believability: 4/10: Like I mentioned in powerplay, warping reality like that is a bit of a stretch.

Powerplay: - 1 /10: Given your mutant character, it is kind of manipulative of you to reshape the world around him. Although the stuff you do is fairly underpowered, it still pushes the envelope a bit.

Inventiveness: 7/10: Working the belt into the fabric of your clothing is a cool idea. The grenades were also useful, if not overwhelmingly creative ways to deal with your enemy.
Personality/Flair: 6/10: Goggled, camouflaged, and ready to whup some, your character took off with my imagination quite well.

Cleverness: 6/10: I just wish I could have seen more of your style. I’ve seen nothing overly shocking in this category, since you didn’t do all that much in the arena. Still, your flair seemed to suggest you had some tricks up your sleeve.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 Nothing wrong with this.

Teamwork: 7/10 You took the chance from Fade’s escape well, and made the most of it. Good job!

Total: 39