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PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Trot, as much as we support bringing other existing characters, items and worlds into the Dojo, I'm a little concerned with the overboard proliferation of so many items taken directly from a television program.

Now, if you have a good reason for all of these Shen Gong Wu's, I'll consider adding them, but you're going to have to come up with a pretty good explanation/purpose. Some are simply unsuitable - for example, the Fist of Tebigong - the Dojo doesn't use a number based combat system, so doubling damage is pretty hard to do...

Otherwise, I request that you at least rename and rework most of your stuff so it's a bit more personal - a short but inspiring description is a good start. Other peoples ideas can be a good start, but try throwing in your own style. If you insist on maintaining these as Shen Gong Wu's, I do believe that each one is a unique artifact, is it not? How exactly did you acquire multiples for sale ...?

I don't mind seeing some "borrowed" items from shows, books or movies, but I can't approve an entire store full without due cause... Confused

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 11:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Item #17:
Name: Twin Terra Dao blades
Classification: RP item
Description: These twin swords, have limited control over plants, deflect rock or coal that's equal or less of the owner's weight. Combined with the Kai Gem of Strength, summons quicksand or a mud slide. Combined with the Kuzusu Blaze Gem, fire a meteor or many tiny fragments of a huge one.(Can't use any powers after any one combo above until 2 posts.)
Price: 3000
Stock Requested: 10

((I mixed some together, with more, is it better?))

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 8:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's fine, Trot. Much improved. Your description is clearer, and it's not a direct copy of something else. I'll drop it in your inventory momentarily. Wink
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