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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:45 pm    Post subject: greetings great ones. Reply with quote

greetings i am menelvagor from albia 2k and the gameware forums.

im not all that great at RPing, acording to pantheron (or panther385)
its because my grammer needs work.

but im here to learn if possible and die if not.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Hello, Menelvagor. Here have a gift.'

*Trace gives menelvagor a blue bag.*

"Have some candy I made, this is the version 100.5. Enjoy!"

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"thank you trace"
*menelvagor opens the bag takes out a piece of candy*
"mmm its good thank you again"
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome to the forums Menelvagor, I hope you enjoy RPing here.

I must admit, it is a nice change of pace to have someone openly admit their own weaknesses like you have. I'm sure that many people here would be more than happy to give you a few helping hints with your grammar - once you get the hang of the basics, it's really quite simple.

Anyways, just taking a quick look at your opening post, here's a couple of basic changes (I could correct more, but I think it'd just get annoying if I went overboard Razz):

menelvagor wrote:
Greetings, I am menelvagor from albia 2k and the gameware forums.

I'm not all that great at RPing, according to pantheron (or panther385)
it's because my grammar needs work.

But i'm here to learn if possible and die if not.


There was nothing horribly wrong with it, so it wasn't too bad imo. Things to remember are to use a capital "I" when referring to yourself, apostrophes for shortened words like "I'm" and "it's" and capital letters at the start of a new sentance. Hope this helps Smile.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hello! And welcome to the Dojo!

I'd ask you to leave your sanity in the skull shaped baskets but since you've come from Gameware and A2K I doubt you have any.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You would be correct danikat, I didn't even have any for albia2k.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I bid you my welcome, for whatever that is worth. Welcome to Blackstar Dojo, the realm of where masters and pupils alike shall frolic amongst the dairies with idiot smiles plastered upon their faces! Fie upon thee, God of Insanity! I will not bend to thy will! Bubo est homo per se!

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But enough of my bloviation! Welcome, menelvagor. Welcome to the Blackstar Dojo.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome Menelvagor! Have this free liver of luck(freshly stolen from a leprechaun)! *Give Menelvagor a liver dripping with blood.*
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome... Many offers of help will be offered if you ask for it.... So don't be afraid to ask...

Anyways, welcome, and have a piece of dust, when you have enough, I'll help you find a use for it....

*A large humanoid wasp lands in front of Menelvagour and puts a crate of six jars of honey in front of him....*

That honey is extra sweet, enjoy....

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