Results-Individual:Round 1-Match 4: Little Sister v Masamura

[HisLordship]

[Little Sister]:

Believability: 7/10: Always keeping you power-levels in control, you succeed well with continuity of the story. You have an excellent grasp on reality.

Powerplay: - 1/10: Creating the storm was a slight exaggeration of your power. But, as a megalomaniac, what else am I to expect from you?

Inventiveness: 4/10: Crafting hooks from fibrous polymers of hair is not a unique. However, using the red eye to predict the gunfire and movements of Kat_05 was. I would have appreciated this manoeuvre much more had you not tried to kill her.

Personality/Flair: 9 /10: Definitely present there. Narcissistic and sadistic, your character sings of the violent, psychotic intoxication of power. Oppressive ego resounds throughout your style.

Cleverness: 6/10: Sadistically witty, as usual. A few excellent little quips worked well. Tinkering with the Dream-Scape furthered your cause. An excellent use of your environment,

Grammar/Spelling: 10 /10 Nothing to report here, other than perfection.

Total: 35





[Masamura]

Believability: 4/10: “Masamura flapped his wings and dodged the hooks.” Such hippopotamic literary elegance! Some more descriptors, please. They would greatly enhance the story.

Powerplay: - 2/10: I will not insult your intelligence as to why I deducted these points.

Inventiveness: 5/10: The style is somewhat lacking, to my tastes. My character did this, doing this, and this. He then did this…. I fear nothing outstanding comes of this, but nothing damned either.

Personality/Flair: 4/10: Had you been present to play your party, I would accurately gauge your personality and style. Alas, you were not overly present before the temporal cut-off. From what I can tell I fear that - woe upon my liberal arts education! – I do not understand any of the digimon allusions. Who in Danté’s hell is Dexmon? Why does your character spit metallic balls?

Cleverness: 5/10: I find nothing in here overly witty. Alas, most manoeuvres here seem to smack of they seem to be taken from various portions of Japanese popular culture.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 Not major complaints.

Total: 26