UncleAsriel Red Belt
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 8:25 am Post subject: Results - Team: Round 1 - Match 1: EC v Guardian |
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Whee! I'm back! Sorry to have taken so lon... I've beeing doing more odd jobs than you could shake a stick at. Among the most consuming of these was a one-legged, filthy, foul-mouthed neo-Nazi carnival guy, who I worked for for at least a week...long, tiring story. Anyway, here's the results:
[The Evil Council]
Believability: 6/10: Despite gods, goddesses, possessed puppets, and all manner of weirdness, you guys never pushed the envelope too much. Then again, you ARE the evil Council.
Powerplay: -6 /10: Netdroid, what have you done? Letting loose overpowered weapons and laying waste to the city. Naughty Evil Council. No pocky for you.
Inventiveness: 10/10: The bits with the water clones were nifty, especially shaping them to ‘feel’ natural.
Personality/Flair: 10 /10: Being one of the longest-living roleplay groups in this community, you’ve honed this to a T. Absolutely perfect.
Cleverness: 6/10: Witty writing –especially from Netdroid, who could be joining Addman among my personal favourites for RP humour –helps hold the Council’s schemes together. The Paranesia / Holloweyes dynamic was especially fun to watch.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10: Perfect Score. You guys are easy to understand, and don’t make my English teachers rabid.
Teamwork: 9/10: The 3kul /Shaon work together was brilliant.
Total: 45
[The Guardians]
Believability: 8 /10: What can I say? You show incredible restraint. No crazy, overt-the-top-ness of the EC. As well, I like that you got knocked out, Shine, and how you almost died by locusts, Goron. Excellent.
Powerplay: - 2/10: I see nothing that the Guardians did was overly powerplay-ish. Jho’lhak’s confrontation of Shaon pushed the envelope a bit, butnot horribly so. Good job!
Inventiveness: 7 /10: Angelic orders coming in as backup, human/animal hybrids whining about lava and munching on antelope, foul-mouthed and spunky genetically engineered humans attacking locusts in a variety of interesting means…. Grade A
Personality/Flair: 8/10: Pretty prominent here, too. The guardians are starting to get a more defined style of their own, and I rather like it. Special mention goes to Shine, who really seems to epitomize the “Good but not goody-two-shoes†feel of the guardians. I only wish that Goron didn’t resort to "OW! Mayday, may- OUCH! Goron needs ass- F***!" It’s probably the character, but still….
Cleverness: 7/10: Not as much versatility as I’d like to seen, what what was there was admirable.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10 Nothing wrong here! The guardians are punctuation (and spelling) perfect.
Teamwork: 6/10: I’d have liked to see some more of this on this side, but the Sekhmet/Shine/Jho’Lhak partnership worked out well enough.
Total:44 _________________ "The tragedy of Canada is that it could have had British culture, French cuisine and American technology. Instead it got American culture, British cuisine and French technology." ~ Oscar Wilde [Source:Uncyclopedia.org] |
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