Results-Individual: Round 1- Match 5: Kassato v Magus

[HisLordship]

[Magus Magus]:

Believability: 8 /10: Considering you are an animate globule of mucus, your character seemed quite constrained by the laws of believability, even –dare I say it –experiencing pain as heat consumed you. Most to my taste.

Powerplay: - 3 /10: Despite being an amorphous androphageous collection of mucus, divine revelation is still divine revelation. I am of a school of belief that an encounter with the mind of a god after a lifetime of bookwork will always elicit a fear-response. Handled with stylistic grace, however, your performance is almost wholly forgivable.

Inventiveness: 7/10: Infiltrating an opponent’s circulatory system? Certainly an original method of bringing the epée to your enemy’s throat. The ingestion of oneself into the body of another is usually considered defeat; your resourcefulness alone transmuted it into a victory.

Personality/Flair: 6/10: Cool. In control. A competent and sagacious figure I must admire. Mucus with gall. You show above average regard in this category.

Cleverness: 6 /10: Deceiving your opponent into believing you are capable of drowning is a tactic that earns my praise. My regrets were that more of this could not be seen

Grammer/Spelling: 10 /10 No personal or professional complaints here in regard to this.

Total: 32


[Kassato]

Believability: 6/10: Invoking moonshine, sunshine, and heaven knows what else as though they are part of a daily routine seem to stretch the realms of believability to some extent. Liquefying the icy wastes I have laid out for you does cross the margins of powerplay for my parameters. Still, admitting to the innards of your armour dissolving is a worthwhile taking of damage on your part.

Powerplay: - 5/10: See my above post regarding overpowered courses of action. Not the most abusive I’ve seen, but definitely pushing it for this contest.

Inventiveness: 5 /10: Many of Kassato’s abilities are unpleasantly reminiscent of bad anime. An overpowered character bellowing out some elementally themed role-call before unleashing a destructive blast of something. Still, the concept of your armour dissolving earns merit, as does allowing Magus inside of you.

Personality/Flair: 8 /10: You portray the avatar of a dark and angry god with considerable passion. Highly potent indeed

Cleverness: 5/10: Nothing notable here. A typical god in the vein of Shiva, destroyer of worlds, in a real bad mood.

Grammar/Spelling: 10/10: Nothing to note here other than perfection.

Total: 29