Results-Tag:Round 1-Match 1:Sora/Masamura(Mag) v Embri/Angel

[LordPsycho]

Red Angel/Embri

Believability: 9/10 : You two stayed true to your profile and the enviroment...except for certain alterations....

Powerplay -2/-10: The whole "turning DP's cave into a fire-pit" thing is a bit too powerful for my liking...at least when in use by a person's regular character.

Inventiveness: 7/10 : Using a telepathic link to have one person monitor the other...inventive...going ot have to prevent that in the next round.

Personality/Flair: 6/10 : I've always enjoyed reading Embri's RP style...it's so rich that even when posting a small snippet, she brings you into her character. The foul's movement is the perfect example...just don't go into labor during one of the matches please.

As for Red Angel, I would have liked to see more of the insanity she earned when she faced off with the Evil Angel and earned her wings, but I'm always a sucker for a fighter being out of their mind.

Cleverness: 5/10 : Although powerplayish, turning the cave into a volcanoe tube to limit the places Kat could hide was ingenius.

Grammer/Spelling: 10/10: No noticable Mistakes

Teamwork: 9/10: You used your natural link to your advantage, letting you two work together and cooperate even when seperated...now to patch that loophole

Total: 44/60

Sora/Masamura

Believability: 9/10 : Another FMA fan? I have the whole series with the original japanese dubbing and fan-subtexting Your tardiness excused (we've all had family over), you gave a good performance

Powerplay -3/-10: Even Ed's auto-mail (considered the best in his world) would have buckled under that kind of weight and heat...and I doubt you've been to Psychotopia to upgrade.

Inventiveness: 3/10 : Most of your ideas and concepts are borrowed, such as your ducks, which admittedly were inspired by my Giant Radioactive Flying Moo-Cows (yes, the Moo is important.) I'd like to see some expansion on the FMA theme, if anything but incorporating something from the Dojo into it...maybe using Psychotopian Warp Crystals to supply an energy boost to the Alchemic reaction?

Personality/Flair: 7/10 : Played true to the FMA character archetype, confident, if not over-cocky.

Cleverness: 7/10 : Using ducks to butter me up? Clever, but flawed. On Blackstar, due to my admin position, I get to play God...and do quiet often. If this were any other place, though, your spirit comment would be right...you should also be aware of the Armadillo spying ducks I sold to Danikat...

Grammer/Spelling: 10/10: No noticable mistakes

Teamwork: 0/10: I saw no participation from your other character, nor was she brought in at an oppurtune moment to fight...I can't award points for what doesn't exist, unfortunately.

Total: 33/60

I'd like to have seen more fighting, but circumstances prevented it, unfortunately. Sometimes these things come down to bad luck. However, Embri/Red Angel will now be facing the winner of the Cirrial/Churitsu v Mac/Azaria match. Good luck.