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-Results- Individuals: Round 1 - Match 1: Churitsu v Naine

 
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 10:38 pm    Post subject: -Results- Individuals: Round 1 - Match 1: Churitsu v Naine Reply with quote

Cirrial

Believability: 8/10 : Miniscule details will always kill you. In a zero-G enviroment (aka zero-acceleration), adjusting your limbs would adjust your momentum, not your inertia (which is the same measurement as your mass), but only Engineer's and Physicist would notice (guess what you you got for a judge?). There were several instinces of these physic's malfunctions (you already had non-linear, or rotational motion, why would you stop when you get it?), but overall a believable performance...just check your physic's book a bit closer next time.

Powerplay -2/-10: I'd expect some kind of damage from an asteroid impact...instead I got nothing...if you had re-inforced your suit after that last fight, you should have mentioned so.

Inventiveness: 9/10 : I've always like the inventiveness of a cyborg dolphin, and you manage to play it fairly well. Congrats

Personality/Flair: 5/10 : But the dolphin routine does have it's setbacks...your character seemed a bit...dry. The onboard computer had more personality...the computer over riding to send the message was humorous.

Cleverness: 6/10 : Using your rapid-fire rifle to adjust your torque was a clever way to navigate in the weightlessness...but again, the short match brought you down.

Grammer/Spelling: 8/10: There were a few mistakes, but it took a spellcheck to catch them.

Total: 34/50

Churitsu (Shaon)

Believability: 9/10 : Again, little physics details, but nothing I'd expect you to know. Otherwise a good performance

Powerplay -2/-10: In your final post, you got hit in a pressurized suit in a vacuum...you should have had more problems than a bald spot on your tail.

Inventiveness: 9/10 :Great use of the field to your advantage. Using an asteroid as a weapon was a great idea, and bracing yourself against another asteroid of equal weight to keep your velocity was also a great use of enviroment...however, the second asteroid should have speed off at a velocity equal in speed and opposite in direction to the first...Newton's third law and all.

Personality/Flair: 3/10 : I would have expected more of an attitude from anything part wolf...he seemed kinda -- childish.

Cleverness: 7/10 : Again, using the asteroids was a very clever move, and kept your opponent off guard.

Grammer/Spelling: 9/10: A few mispelled words, but it took a spell-checker to catch them

Total: 35/50

This was an incredibly close match, and in the end came down to the spellchecker...However, Shaon bested Cirrial, if not just bearly...just do me a favor, and next time give me something more to judge. Just so you know, the winner of this match goes up against against the winner of the Micka/GBE bout, which was Micka...get ready Shoan.

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