Results- Individual Round 1 Match 3: Father Mac v Ace Addman

[UncleAsriel]

Ace Addman:

Believability: 9 /10: Always well controlled and carefully worded, with no noticeable grammatic or spelling boo-boos. Your character, while powerful, seemed to be now overly so, and the reconciliation with Father Mac before the fight was a nice, humane touch.

Powerplay: -4 /10: Taking control of the sexual drive of a god portion of the daily shoppers is a little megalomanic. The scimitar preparing to lay waste to the Starbucks had some potential for abuse, but you timed out before anything overly explosive happened. Both were handled with enough elaboration and grace to be forgivable.

Inventiveness: 9 /10: Lust dust? Sign me up! Hilarious and innovative RP item; could I buy some in your store once the Olympics are done?

Personality/Flair: 10 /10: Definitely a perfect score here. The dashing, daring Ace Addman really came to life. I rather enjoyed the part at the beginning with Ace flirting with on the woman asking for an autograph.

Cleverness: 8/10: Starbucks is the avatar of evil? What about Wal-Mart? In any event, the overall performance was quite enjoyable, and the daffy rogue that is Ace Addman certainly brought man smiles to my face in this round

Grammar/Spelling: 10 /10 Nothing to report on here. All is well in the land of the dictionary.

Total 42

Father Mac:

Believability: 9 /10: Ever-faithful shepherd of the flock, I have few qualms with you. You spread a radiance and a clam piety that works in your favour.

Powerplay: -1/10: The lust dust immunity seemed to come a little outta left field, but you seem to be in control of that stuff. Having telepathy and telekinesis, you’ve got enough mental discipline to hold off on your libido. Some struggling against the drive would’ve been nice to see, but I’m not going to complain.

Inventiveness: 6/10: The telepathy, TK and the like are all good abilities. Sweeping away the litter was a nice touch, but nothing overly exciting. The preaching to the horny populace was in-character enough, but not overly thrilling for me to read.

Personality/Flair: 10 /10: The little comments, like encouraging fair trade goods, worked real well. The decency to the common people really warmed to me. Good stuff.

Cleverness: 7/10: I’m always tickled when you call your flock “my brotha’s and sista’s”. Other things, like directing the lust dust away from the general area, show some good examples of decent citizenship. Not overly witty, but in and of themselves, but practical-minded humourousness.

Grammar/Spelling: /10 Nothing but perfection.

Total 41

[Kat_05]

Did you forget Grammer/Spelling?

Not that I can talk, Not having posted a judgement at all....


[Edit: Thanks for reminding me, Kat. Grrr! I'm so stupid, sometimes...[/Edit]