My character Zukoron

[Zukoron]

Name:
Zukoron

Age:
Age is unknown to him, but he is aware of 18 years of his life and thinks he is 34 do to someone saying he looked that age.

Gender:
He is a man and he is human like, but he can not have any children with any other race.

Species:
Jelkozeen is the name and this species is human like in look and functions, but genetic codes are different and also their brains function a little bit more differently.

Description and Physiology: Body type:Muscular
Hieght:6'2"
wiegth(lbs):220
Hair length:4inches
Hair color:Jet black
Hair thickness:Thin and easily moves
Eye colors:Human like, but the whites are red and the iris and pupil are black
Tatoos:Two dragons, one of darkness and one of fire and they are across his chest.


Physical Abilities:
He can run faster than 80mph and is trainning to run faster. His skin is tough enough to handle heat as hot as a prominance of the sun (Which is five times hotter than the core of the sun) He can move four tons. He can move himself with his aura

Supernatural Abilities:
Flames which is the ability to create and control the flames. He can also fuse darkness with it and also summon up tenticals of darkness and he can teleport to any place his aura is. When he is angered his teeth become longer and sharper and to a point as well He also gains skin jet black and is like armor and is tough to break through.

Signature Moves/Attacks:
Shattered darkness:This is a move once caught in for even an intant it is extremely hard to get away from. This is when an orb of darkness is released and sent to the opponent and when this happens if touched it will shatter and then millions of shards of darkness harder than steel will try to reform into a ball with the person as the core and it will dig through skin and bone to become a whole again.

Silver streak:This is when Zukorons aura is visable as black and his inner aura is silver. He jumps high into the sky and comes down to the opponent with a kick with both legs. It is strong enough to leave a creator five feet deep and ten feet wide.

Weaponry:
He has gauntlets that he wears all the time, they are spiked on the knuckles and up the fingers and come to a point like claws would.

Equipment:
He has no equuipment, just him.

Home:
He lives in a forest filled with black roses that sprout where he is. The ground produces them under his feet as his darkness was founded do to a love harshley ripped away.

Origin:
Jelkozeen is the name of his home planet.

History:
He does not remember his past and for a good reason. He locked it away because of its pain it brings him.

Alignment:
He could be called evil, but really it is him looking out for himself.

Personality:
He is silent unless he is with friends then he will talk, but not much. He is not shy he just does not like to waste his breath.

Known Weaknesses:
He does not really have a true weakness, his only weakness though is his anger. This will make him reckless

Allies:
None

[HisLordship]

Persona, home, these roses, that past! Expound, please!

[Zukoron]

His age is over the age of earth and is about 8 billion years old.

His home planet was destroyed by his own anger. He was angered do to the one whom he asked to marry him slept around and had men try to kill him and she made sure he felt like a weak piece of trash. He got filled with rage and his normally bright blue flames became jet black flames and destroyed the planet he was on and many other places were destroyed. His powers were very strong and they concealed his body with a hard shell made of flames that stayed intact in space because of its supernatural properties. He crash landed on earth and inside what became Mt. St Helens. He awoke when it blew its side. Zukoron remembered his past then, but eighteen years ago he was in a very harsh crash involving a car that hit him hard enough to send him flying. He woke up and didn't remember a thing.

The black roses come from the grass seeds yet to actually grow into grass. Zukorons darkness alters the seeds and makes them black roses. In a more dark place such as a place with lush vegitation a lot more black roses will sprout since there are more seeds that are around.

He lives in a forest that is unknown and this forest is like a rain forest and has natives of the lands around his lands, the natives do not go in since Zukoron has for a long time kept them out. He ventures now and they still stay away since the black roses there stay living.

He is cold and cruel to anyone who he does not know or care for. If he cares for someone then he will show care to them, but he will not bend over backwards to make them happy. He will look more for his own happiness than that of others. He will also be cruel and let some one die. He is of the opinion of if it is natural and you can not beat it then your going to die.

[HisLordship]

Much better. Although I must point out: an abiulity to destory entire planets and endure an explosion of the magnitude of Mount St.Helens, yet a car accident eliminate 1, 999, 999, 982 years worth of memory? BLackstar is an insane place, so that could work - yet I do wonder.

[Zukoron]

Well he was weak and was hit were his feet were taken out from under him a low to the ground kind of car and it was going extremely fast and also the reason he did not die when it exploded was do to his shell of hardened fire. He could not move out of the way and with his loss of memory makes him just as weak when he was a new born basically and that is what he has been able to recover in power wise.

[KC11]

This looks good, except I would suggest adding a little bit more weakness to this character. He seems pretty powerful, and a good weakness could nicely balance him out. Maybe he could be susceptible to water or ice, seeing as he is a fire character? Just my two cents. Whenever I have a character based in an element, he/she is usually weak against the element opposite that one.