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CrazyD. The Tyranid.

 
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Do you believe that CrazyD is safe?
Yes- He has been trained well
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Maybe- I belive he is trained well but I do not trust it.
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No- The Tyranids are rude villians who will never change their ways.
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Other- Please explain.
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CrazyD
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:04 pm    Post subject: CrazyD. The Tyranid. Reply with quote

Name:
CrazyD

Age:
3
(I age 1 year in 5 human years.)
(I'm 15 in human years.)
Gender:
Male

Species:
Tyranid

Height/Weight
About 6 feet tall and weighs about 300(you got a point barret)

Description and Physiology:
Skin is dark red. Bone armour is a turquoise blue colour. Has four arms. Top two are scythe-like bone blades. Bottem two are holding a weapon for spaying acid.

Physical Abilities:
Can run extremely fast and can also jump long distances.

Supernatural Abilities:
-Camouflage: Able to cloak itself, making whole body and any objects it's touching completely invisable.
-Multiply: Can make other tyranid images (including all from genetic repository) by concentating. Can create up to 50 other tyranids. Used to frighten a enemy away.
-Extreme sence- Sences are 20 times better than regular humans. Touch sence so stong, that he may be albe to feel someone or somethings energy from 5 meters away. Has to concentrate to use.

Signature Moves/Attacks:
Blinds opponent with acid, then will suddenly rushs into close combat using forarms to injure or kill enemy target.

Weaponry:
This creature hold a bio-weapon that uses its own acid like blood to burn flesh or armour. Body produces acid quickly enough to keep an infinate supply. Slowly tires self.
Other than that, it uses sharp needle like teeth or its razor arms to rip something apart.

Equipment:
None

Home:
CrazyD has no .It wanders planets looking for food and a place to stay. Recently, It has stayed on the dojoains planet roaming forests.

Origin:
The Tyranids have a planet called Malvolion. This is where millions of Tyranids wait and plan there next attack.

History:
The Tyranids are often feared for there brutal attacks on planets. Not much more is known because not many species survive these attacks.

Alignment:
Just recently on the planet of Niegh, a small group of Tyranids, who had attacked the planet, were captured for research. The scientists successfully completed a experiment that turned CrazyD from a heartless fiend into a creature that will only attack evil. CrazyD also my be known to attack its own race to protect a human.

Personality:
Does not speak out too often. Likes to be silent but has a short temper. If I happen to become angry with you, I will not kill you. I may leave you with a cut, bite mark, or if really angery, a burn my from weapon.(BE AWARE)

Known Weaknesses:
Has not any weaknesses that are known. Yet...

Allies:
Chaos: A large Tyranid dog that was also involved in the experiment. WarningDO NOT STARE INTO IT'S EYES! YOU WILL TEMPERARILY GO INSANE, THEN YOU WILL GO ON A MAD RAMPAGE! Twisted Evil Effect only lasts for 15 minutes. Chaos's location is not currently known. Will summon if called by CrazyD.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't want to bug you again, but. . . uh, there's another comment that I want to make.

so you've got the height of this guy. Fine, six feet is dandy, but the weight that you've got can't be right. 185 lbs is far too light for such a creature as CrazyD is. Think of it this way. A very strong, very ripped human weight lifter, at about 6 feet tall weighs about 250. Now, consider what you've got going on here. You've got a humanoid dinosaur creature at the same height, with an extra pair of arms. Let's say that the average human arm weighs 15 lbs. Right there you've got an extra thirty pounds. Plus, I don't know how much more dense a "tyranid" is than a human being, but I would assume quite a bit more so. So you've got a big chunk of weight to add from that as well.

Assuming you want to stick with the six foot height, you've got a creature that weighs a piece over 300 lbs.

So, that's my piece. Do with it what you want. Mind you, I'm not trying to criticize your character. I'm trying to help you think realistically, which will only help you be a better role player.

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And the raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamp-light o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted - nevermore!

He's gone stark raven mad 'e has
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