Blackstar vs. The Corporation = Judging! [Panther's]

[Panther385]

Sorry it's kinda late.... *sweatdrop*


The Corporation (Till Doyle, Laur Doyle, Micheal Rawlings) :

Grammar: ( 8 ) Not much- missing a period and a comma here and there.

Spelling: ( 8 ) Ditto.

Readability: (15) It was a little confusing in places... But that's probably because I'm an idiot.

Style: (15) ...I'm not very good on commenting with styles... Yours seemed pretty basic and down-to-earth. Oh, and... MECHAS! My Inner Japanese Fangirl has been subdued!

Powerplay: (16) ...Suddenly saying the gold was made of plastic seemed very powerplayish... Wouldn't it have been said in the beginning if it was fake?

Ingenuity: (15) Could've done a little better...


Blackstar Team (Leporidae, TROT, Cirrial):

Grammar: (4) Would it hurt to use a Spellchecker once in a while?!

Spelling: (4) Ditto yet again!

Readabiltiy: (10) OH GOD MY EYES! Read your posts before you submit them, it'll save me from temporary blindness...

Style: (15)Difficult to read, but not so bad once you get used to it... I guess.

Powerplay: (20) Nothing I saw.

Ingenuity: (17) Throwing bricks at big-ass Mechs? Lollercoster.


FINAL SCORE:

The Corporation: 77

Blackstar Team: 70

WINNER: The Corporation


Close call, guys. Good job to all of ye.

[Goron40]

No, the gold is plastic. I asked DP about that... What? I wanted to steal some.

Also, it doesn't really matter since you judged both teams with the same format, but try to use the format that the rest of the judges are using (ie -

Category: Score/Possible Score Description

Go post this in the offices... Now all we need is Shaon... Lazy bum...

Also, a note to ALL JUDGES:

Beginning the second round we are going to use the score system as described here.

[Shaon]